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發(fā)表于 2010-5-25 10:49 | 只看該作者
文采極佳 絕對(duì)欣賞

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[LV.2]偶爾看看I

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發(fā)表于 2010-5-25 16:51 | 只看該作者
填得好,申請(qǐng)加精

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 樓主| 發(fā)表于 2010-5-25 18:24 | 只看該作者
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原帖由 <I>tonehe</I> 于 2010-5-25 16:51 發(fā)表 <A href=\"http://www.nujv.cn/forum.php?mod=redirect&goto=findpost&amp;pid=721671&amp;ptid=52151\" target=_blank><IMG border=0 alt=\"\" src=\"static/image/common/back.gif\"></A> 填得好,申請(qǐng)加精
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<P>呵呵,嗯,好! </P>

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發(fā)表于 2010-5-25 21:57 | 只看該作者
欣賞了好幾遍,這兩個(gè)詞牌的詞都填寫得很棒,贊一個(gè)。

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文筆很美, 欣賞了

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<>詞意境美,句流暢!但是有出律之處,俺沒有時(shí)間,琴兒才女自己對(duì)照檢查一下~~祝好!</P>
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