點絳唇

蕭琴兒

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<DIV align=center><STRONG><FONT size=6><FONT color=#ff6666><FONT face=楷體_GB2312>點 絳 唇</FONT></FONT></FONT></STRONG></DIV>
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<DIV align=center><STRONG><FONT color=#ff6666><FONT face=楷體_GB2312><FONT size=4>文/蕭琴兒<WBR><WBR style="LINE-HEIGHT: 1.3em"></FONT></FONT></FONT></STRONG></DIV>
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<CENTER><FONT style="LINE-HEIGHT: 1.3em" face=楷體_GB2312 color=navy size=5><STRONG>滿地白花，</STRONG></FONT><WBR style="LINE-HEIGHT: 1.3em"></CENTER>
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<CENTER><FONT style="LINE-HEIGHT: 1.3em" face=楷體_GB2312 color=navy size=5><STRONG>風寒梅舞笙簫鬧。</STRONG></FONT><WBR style="LINE-HEIGHT: 1.3em"></CENTER>
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<CENTER><FONT style="LINE-HEIGHT: 1.3em" face=楷體_GB2312 color=navy size=5><STRONG>倩影新襖，</STRONG></FONT><WBR style="LINE-HEIGHT: 1.3em"></CENTER>
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<CENTER><FONT style="LINE-HEIGHT: 1.3em" face=楷體_GB2312 color=navy size=5><STRONG>只為年春到。</STRONG></FONT><WBR style="LINE-HEIGHT: 1.3em"></CENTER><FONT style="LINE-HEIGHT: 1.3em" face=楷體_GB2312 size=5>
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<CENTER><STRONG><FONT color=navy>去是年尾，</FONT></STRONG></FONT><WBR style="LINE-HEIGHT: 1.3em"></CENTER>
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<CENTER><FONT style="LINE-HEIGHT: 1.3em" face=楷體_GB2312 color=navy size=5><STRONG>來是春報曉。</STRONG></FONT><WBR style="LINE-HEIGHT: 1.3em"></CENTER>
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<CENTER><FONT style="LINE-HEIGHT: 1.3em" face=楷體_GB2312 color=navy size=5><STRONG>開口笑，</STRONG></FONT><WBR style="LINE-HEIGHT: 1.3em"></CENTER>
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<CENTER><FONT style="LINE-HEIGHT: 1.3em" face=楷體_GB2312 color=navy size=5><STRONG>人間拱手好，</STRONG></FONT><WBR style="LINE-HEIGHT: 1.3em"></CENTER>
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<CENTER><FONT style="LINE-HEIGHT: 1.3em" face=楷體_GB2312 color=navy size=5><STRONG>琴瑟依然巧。</STRONG></FONT></CENTER>
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[ 本帖最后由 蕭琴兒 于 2010-2-14 10:51 編輯 ]

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<>塵弟新年快樂！這是我看到你的第一首詞作品，韻律悠揚、鬧春在雪、梅花飛舞中盡顯。 <BR>寫的不錯，壓韻沒有問題，有幾處出律~~<BR></P>
<>附：點絳唇 詞譜對照檢查一下</P>
<><BR>⊙仄平平（句）<BR>⊙平⊙仄平平仄（韻）<BR>仄平平仄（韻）<BR>⊙仄平平仄（韻）</P>
<P>⊙仄平平（句）<BR>⊙仄平平仄（韻）<BR>平⊙仄（韻）<BR>仄平平仄（韻）<BR>⊙仄平平仄（韻）</P>

蕭琴兒

由于忙,好久沒來了,剛看到你的帖!
謝謝你指點和欣賞非常榮幸,另祝你新年快樂!

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呵呵，是琴兒的佳作，俺當時看錯了，還以為是蕭幕塵弟弟的作品呢，敬請諒解，都怪俺眼濁

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原帖由 蕭琴兒 于 2010-2-18 20:31 發(fā)表

由于忙,好久沒來了,剛看到你的帖!
謝謝你指點和欣賞非常榮幸,另祝你新年快樂!

琴兒不用客氣，祝虎年吉祥~~